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Good Writing Habits
 

Other Good Writing Habits Topics

 

1. Preparation

2.Writing Through


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3. Feedback & Revision

 

(v) RE-PRIORITISING

 

Getting feedback isn’t about receiving praise. Don’t look for it. Getting feedback is about discovering what works and what doesn’t.

If something isn’t working, of course you need to act on it. But you may also want to act on what is working.

When you’re writing through, you’re so close to your story that you can be as blind to your successes as your failures. You need someone else to show you the wood for the trees. A particular character has really taken off, a particular narrative twist is so effective. shakespeareNot that other parts of the story are weak, but those parts are outstanding.

Here’s where you may want to re-prioritize and give more weight to a particular character or narrative twist or whatever. Perhaps more build-up to the twist, perhaps more interest directed upon this character in the thought and speech of others. Let your successes have their full value!

With short stories, priorities are especially important. Whereas a novel allows room for the free development of many characters and narrative angles, a short story is much more focused. Minor notes have to be ruthlessly subordinated to the major note—a revelation, an insight, a single turn of events.

Feedback from readers/other writers/editors can help you locate that major note and make it ring out loud and clear. Perhaps it emerged only late in the process of writing, perhaps you never realized how crucial it was, perhaps you muffled it in the telling. All of those things keep happening to me—the muffling most of all! When I revise a short story, there always seems to be some reprioritization involved.

 

OTHER FEEDBACK & REVISION TOPICS

 

(i) YOUR READERS ARE YOUR NOVEL

(ii) FEEDBACK FROM ORDINARY READERS

(iii) FEEDBACK FROM OTHER WRITERS

(iv) FEEDBACK FROM EDITORS

(vi) TAKE CHANGES ON BOARD

(vii) REVISION THAT ESCALATES

(viii) KILLING YOUR DARLINGS

(ix) AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT

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