1. Beginnings
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(ii) STARTING ON THE INSIDE |
Starting inside a scene is very different to approaching it slowly from outside. There’s a special verbal knack to presenting it as the characters experience it.
In real life, if you’re describing a room in a house to someone who hasn’t been there, you say things like:
There’s a long table …
and a painting of a landscape …
and a green carpet …
Similarly with the 19th century novel:
A small village…
a family that …
Note the ‘a’s, indefinite articles—not ‘the’s.
You move to the definite article only after you’ve introduced these things:
There’s a long table and a vase of chrysanthemums on the table …
When you start a novel inside a scene, though, you use the rather than a, because the characters experience these things as already known and familiar. It’s a sort of pretence that the reader enters into.
She paced up and down on the green carpet …
the table was covered in dust, as usual …
This isn’t exactly a helpful tip—living and reading in the 21st century, any author will do it automatically. Interesting, though.
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